oh rain, why did you go?
i walked on the treacherous path on the mountain.
once again the moose cross my tracks; they mosey off before i can get my
camera.
i don't care.
i only
capture
pictures of the
moments
that matter to me.
my mother walks beside me,
mumbling
words i don't understand.
just like the
mumbling
creek beside us calling in
agony.
that doesn't
matter.
i see a rainbow behind the mist; it's faint
colors
shine through me.
the sun laughs at me;
oh how i love the
rain.
oh
rain.
come back.
why did you go away?
techniques used: consonance, enjambment, and personification.
once again the moose cross my tracks; they mosey off before i can get my
camera.
i don't care.
i only
capture
pictures of the
moments
that matter to me.
my mother walks beside me,
mumbling
words i don't understand.
just like the
mumbling
creek beside us calling in
agony.
that doesn't
matter.
i see a rainbow behind the mist; it's faint
colors
shine through me.
the sun laughs at me;
oh how i love the
rain.
oh
rain.
come back.
why did you go away?
techniques used: consonance, enjambment, and personification.
I like the choice of words you used. I also liked the topic you wrote about. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI liked the vivid details you used in your poem. Your techniques used in your poem were great! Good job!
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